Awakening: Dreamscape – Excerpt II

Only the hum of the light above her made any sound at all. The halls were pristine and clean, as if untouched by the hands of man. Carefully she walked down the halls, looking around every corner before moving on, straining her ears to listen for any on coming footsteps. She wondered if her hearing had been affected by the shift.

Monitor stations blinked in empty rooms, recording the day’s progress for further tests in the morning. She couldn’t help but feel watched. Security cameras blinked at her as she wondered by, she knew that the other team would have rerouted their surveillance before giving her the signal to move.

Still, looking up at her reflection she felt that should not be alone, that just behind her, just inches from the camera’s line of vision something was with her. She took a deep breath and moved on.

The lights flickered out.

She had expected this. She had expected something to go wrong. Still it was only the darkness, nothing to be afraid of. Light in hand she pushed forward, navigating the halls now with a renewed urgency.

She nodded to herself and stepped into the next hall, one careful step at a time, listening for any sound that might forewarn her of on coming trouble. Focus’ she reminded herself, she had to listen in more ways than one, her boss had said. This particular target would have a pull, it wouldn’t want to be sealed away, it would want to be freed. All she had to do was destroy it when she found it.

She wondered if the ease of this mission was a result of this so called god. For a moment she felt reassured. in that case she would be immune to anything until the child was located. Unless it could read her mind, in which case wouldn’t she have been destroyed by now.

Then out of no where a loud burst of doors being thrown off their hinges slamming against the nearby wall, echoing down the hall followed by a deep hungry roar. It’s sound echoed in her mind as well as in the halls, which frightened her even more.

She grabbed at her pistol hoping that she had enough sense to use it when she saw the monster. She ran, reading tags as she ran by, hoping that the glimpse would be enough to give her all the information that she needed. “This way,” the voice said.

She pushed through the twin doors, pushing harder then intended causing a burst of sound that she knew would alert the escaped thing in the hall. ‘Stay focused’ she told herself, ‘Its not much further’ or so she hoped.

Another set of doors burst open and she found herself in a control room. A semi circle of computers had been arranged, each monitoring a unique attribute of this area.

She stood transfixed by what she saw. She saw an empty room, similar to cell, with children’s drawing polluting the wall. In the darkness of the cell she couldn’t tell what the drawing was, but she knew this was the one she had come for.

She had ignored the monitor stations as she understood very little about the science involved and terms that they used. She paid attention to visual. The child’s door was open, the hall leading to her room was empty. Her heart raced, she was so close.

Then she felt a small tug on her pants. Startled she jumped and drew her weapon pointing it at the dark haired child. She gestured that she wanted up, carried, perhaps wanting a small bit of comfort and human affection. Over all she seemed oblivious to the weapon.

Published in:  on November 27, 2008 at 7:26 pm Leave a Comment
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Act Restructuring

All in all I spent a lot of time considering the structure of my story. I know how it starts and how it ends, it’s the middle bit that gets tricky. I’ve divided my story into 4 acts hoping that this can somehow help me along – I feel that it will on account that i had to look at the story and decide on how future events were meant to come to pass.

Sadly some of the characters that I had wanted to feature more prominently such as Sgt. Scruffy and Damien will likely take a back seat, or play a bigger role in a side project that I have planned when I have more of this series published.

Act 2 needs to be re-written slightly and added on to. Act 3 – needs to have its ending tweaked, and Act 4 needs to be fleshed out better but it’s going to be cool!

I hope.

Published in:  on November 16, 2008 at 2:31 pm Leave a Comment
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Awakening: Dreamscape – Excerpt I

Panic tore through her as she ran barefoot against the cold stone. Everlasting darkness surrounded her filled with sounds of vicious demons, ready and willing to tare her apart. She pounded her fists against the walls as she ran, “Please!” she screamed, “Someone help me!”

“This way,” a barely audible whisper came from the darkness.

Aya’s panic melted away, focusing on the direction the sound had come from. The demons neared, crashing through unseen barriers toward her. She ran. 

“Don’t look back,” the voice told her in the same soft tone, “Never look back.”

(more…)

Published in:  on November 6, 2008 at 7:18 pm Leave a Comment
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